English
This quarter we read a novel entitled "The Outsiders" by S.E. Hinton. It is a story about teenagers and society; the Socs (upper class) and Greasers (lower class). The novel really showed about discrimination in the society. We usually read them together in class, discussed several questions regarding the chapter we read. For the assignment, we did a role play and an essay on the chosen topic. My essay is about how the 'main' Greasers of the novel can be considered as heroes and what does hero personally mean to me.
Why was this sample my best work?
The essay was a sample of my best work because I received a 10, 9, 8 for criteria A, B, C respectively.
What did I do well?
I did an excellent job of organizing my essay and using quotes from the book which supports my idea. I successfully conveyed what I wanted the reader to understand from my paper.
How can I improve?
The weaknesses were grammar and sentence structure. I can improve by asking a friend to peer check my work before submitting it to the teacher.
How does this sample relate to my chosen fundamental concept?
The sample is related to Communication because the assessments that are given are all about communicating. In the presentation, I present my idea so that the target audience will understand. In the essay, I deliver my idea and knowledge regarding the book what I learnt so far. As for holistic learning I learned about discrimination and prejudice from research and reading the book. In intercultural awareness, the novel made me aware about things happening in the society that is still happening until now.
Why was this sample my best work?
The essay was a sample of my best work because I received a 10, 9, 8 for criteria A, B, C respectively.
What did I do well?
I did an excellent job of organizing my essay and using quotes from the book which supports my idea. I successfully conveyed what I wanted the reader to understand from my paper.
How can I improve?
The weaknesses were grammar and sentence structure. I can improve by asking a friend to peer check my work before submitting it to the teacher.
How does this sample relate to my chosen fundamental concept?
The sample is related to Communication because the assessments that are given are all about communicating. In the presentation, I present my idea so that the target audience will understand. In the essay, I deliver my idea and knowledge regarding the book what I learnt so far. As for holistic learning I learned about discrimination and prejudice from research and reading the book. In intercultural awareness, the novel made me aware about things happening in the society that is still happening until now.
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