Persuasive Essay
For English class in quarter 1, everyone was told to make a persuasive essay about our assigned island. My assigned island was Kalimantan. In my essay, I talked about the arts of Kalimantan. The aim of this activity is to promote to make people want to visit the place.
Why was this sample my best work?
Basically, in this quarter we just did two assignments which are persuasive essay and speech. I chose my persuasive essay because it is more convincing and persuasive rather than my persuasive speech. In my essay, I included persuasive vocabularies to make my speech more persuasive of course and included my research that I've conducted as supporting details for my main points, and these things made my essay more interesting to read and able to promote my island. Besides, I chose this work because I got higher grades for this essay compared to my speech.
What did I do well?
I did well in researching about the topic and understanding it, include persuasive vocabularies, put lots of evidence as supporting details, pretty convincing and able to promote my island.
How can I improve?
Eventhough I basically did well on this assignment, there are still some mistakes in the essay such as word choices, adding more details and be a bit more persuasive.
How does this sample relate to my chosen Area of Interaction?
This assignment relates to ATL because in this assignment we learn and improve certain skills such as persuasion, vocabularies, research skills, writing bibliography in MLA format correctly, etc.
Why was this sample my best work?
Basically, in this quarter we just did two assignments which are persuasive essay and speech. I chose my persuasive essay because it is more convincing and persuasive rather than my persuasive speech. In my essay, I included persuasive vocabularies to make my speech more persuasive of course and included my research that I've conducted as supporting details for my main points, and these things made my essay more interesting to read and able to promote my island. Besides, I chose this work because I got higher grades for this essay compared to my speech.
What did I do well?
I did well in researching about the topic and understanding it, include persuasive vocabularies, put lots of evidence as supporting details, pretty convincing and able to promote my island.
How can I improve?
Eventhough I basically did well on this assignment, there are still some mistakes in the essay such as word choices, adding more details and be a bit more persuasive.
How does this sample relate to my chosen Area of Interaction?
This assignment relates to ATL because in this assignment we learn and improve certain skills such as persuasion, vocabularies, research skills, writing bibliography in MLA format correctly, etc.
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